Plot

The plot is a misty thriller, the story based around one main character going to the local hospital to visit his or her brother/sister that has been involved in a recent accident that has landed him/her in the hospital heavily crippled and unable to move or talk (much), the opening scene is based on a bus, the relative during the bus trip is texting/calling and this is how the viewers are alerted to his/her involvement with the character in hospital, the plot develops as we find out that the accident might not have been as much of an accident then what we are first told.., in other words he was involved with the wrong people and they wanted him gone, maybe slightly cheesy but i can work on that, and failed the first time, now they are coming to finish the job, during this time we have no idea of the involvement with these outside people...

The realization scene is when these people are taking the injured relative, this will be show with cuts between the bus scene and the hospital (see story board)

the relative just misses the injured person as the "bad guys" wheel him off in a wheel chair, the closing scene is one of the relative realizing that this person has been taken and the story begins as the credits role (END OF OUR SHORT OPENING)