pics for evaluation

pics for evaulation

Final

Feedback

We all went round each group and watched each others openings, we then got feedback from each group.

Our Feedback

What was good
- Good camera angles
- Shots are consistent and varied.
- Good acting
- Good use of locations
- Very clear

What needs improving
- Message on the phone is hard to read
- It's too long - needs to be cut down
- You can see Alex in the mirror in one of the shots

Newspaper article

We decided to make a dummy newspaper article for our blog. We wanted to get across that this had happened before so we used the title "another girl missing from hospital".
We also thought a picture of the victim was appropriate so we added one we had saved.

Samirs second attempt at the soundtrack.

Even though I had nothing to work with (the picture was still being worked on) I attempted a soundtrack with hopefully suitable sounds. It is not the finished piece- a second draft if you will.

Target Audience

Our target audience is aimed at 12+ as it doesn't contain any violence or severe horror. It is suitable for persons 12 and over because it could possibly disturb younger children as it is quite spooky and mind playing. We chose it to be suitable for 12+ because this age group are very interested in thrillers as there are many different types of thrillers around now-a-days, for example: Crime (Heat, Inside Man) , Psychological (Edge Of Darkness, Psycho) and Action (Die Hard, Transporter)